Saturday 18 March 2017

Further acting on feedback

I have further improved from my feedback i got from members of my target audience. I have again tried to fill up my magazine cover to make it look more full. I have added the following:
                                     

I have added white boxes underneath the images on my cover. I did this to fill up the space and also to give out more information from my cover. I inserted text into the boxes with exciting quotes from the models in the images. This will intrigue readers as they will want to know more, this might persuade them to purchase the magazine to see the full story inside.









I have also re-arranged my previous improvements, I moved them so that I had enough room to insert the boxes with text. This worked well as it filled up more space that was empty. My cover now looks more full and packed with fun, I have showed members of my target audience the improved version and they said "It looks way better!".

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